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When I said I loved you


I wasn't kidding.


I wasn't joking.


I fucking meant it


And I still do.
The shortest piece of shit I've ever written.
*listens to people's opinions* What? Noooo... This wasn't written with someone in mind...
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Egotistical a bit of the nonsensical. Love is what makes us feel as if we felt the coarse side of a shark's skin

Why so serious a bit of the mysterious. Love is what makes us feel as if we hold onto a flaming candle that burns us in our awake.

Visionary a bit of the momentary. Love is what makes us see that the moment we kept as a memory, doesn't ever fade since we don't like the sight of blackness in our mind

I fucking means a way to tell that people have no means to say what the Ego wants, even though all they have to say, Ego loves you, as just as I love my Ego.
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TheDrowningRaven Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so strong yet beautiful... :heart:
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StarlitNova Apr 28, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks^^;
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TheDrowningRaven Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Anytime, your a great poet! :aww:
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StarlitNova Apr 28, 2013  Student Writer
Are you serious or are you trying to mock me?
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TheDrowningRaven Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No, not at all, I thought this one was short and striking, I'm sorry if I offended you...
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StarlitNova Apr 28, 2013  Student Writer
Oh no you didn't! Thank you!
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TheDrowningRaven Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh. phew, your welcome! :D
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StarlitNova Apr 28, 2013  Student Writer
^ ^
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short to the point ..... and ive been there with this in mind recently
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StarlitNova Apr 28, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you the idea popped into my head complete and I thought I'd be an idiot not to post it
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