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Scratch, scratch, scratch, scratch
Slit. slit. slit. slit.
Scratch, scratch, scratch, scratch
Slit. slit. slit. slit.
Over and over and over again
A never ending circle, it never will end
Over and over and over again
Never ending, never ending, never ending, never end
Don't go, don't leave me, don't run away
Don't be like the others, keep your promise and stay
I'm sorry, I didn't mean it, don't leave me, don't go
I'll do anything to keep you from walking out that door
But you won't, will you? I know it is so
It's me, isn't it? It's my issues, I know
Scratch, scratch, scratch, scratch
Slit. slit. slit. slit.
Scratch, scratch, scratch, scratch
Slit. slit. slit. slit...
Well, that was dark. I'm actually quiet pleased with how that turned out though. I'm not sure if this needs a warning, if it does please tell me.
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Pictures-of-words Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Writer
OH! I liked this! The name reminds me of the book Dark Inside by Jeyn Roberts. It's a really good book and your poem reflects it slightly!! GREAT WRITING!!!
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StarlitNova Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Writer
thank you! ive never read that book though
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Pictures-of-words Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Writer
Look it up sommetime? From your poem, you'd probably like it! I Do! ^^
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StarlitNova Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Writer
i definitly will then
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Pictures-of-words Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Writer
awesome!
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