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I'm sorry I didn't fight for you.

That's what you wanted, isn't it?

You wanted me to fall at your feet and beg you to stay, not to leave me.

But you did leave me.

I think you need to realize something,

You had already broken my heart once that day, and to be honest...

I just didn't want it broken again.
This is actually about several people, so don't try to guess.
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Indestructible

If fate decides itself to have a spontaneous combustive reaction
will it light a flame
that's hue will break itself, the attraction.

I don't know how to describe it since its of a law,
rebellion since its a code of ethics's, mother nature had to have saw

Nobody is to blame
if a heart decides to lose what it is rightfully theirs to claim
Even I have lost a fight considering it was the rest of the world, nobody knew my name

If we can freeze time then maybe fix the broken heart's container
Fill it up with ice cold water, since our hearts are burning, our temper arisen, just another way to heal the container.
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KilljoyEmoKid25 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your literature is always so amazing, i love how emotionally powerful it is, you're awesome! ^_^
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StarlitNova Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Student Writer
Yes I am:iconiamawesomeplz:(Prussia reference, I'm not actually that mean) And thanks!
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Delta565 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I find your poems quite good, and they pinch my heart whenever I read them.
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StarlitNova Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist
Ive been there myself. sadly im the one that doesnt get fought for.
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StarlitNova Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Student Writer
Oh I'm so sorry...
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist
Don't be, I survive. I always do and will =)
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DangoLovesYou Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student Writer
Awesome job, as usual. I really like the truth and flow of your writing. :) It's as expressive as the words themselves. It's also part of the reason this is so sad.
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StarlitNova Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks:)
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